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亚城酒仙协会第一次全城代表大会顺利举行
星期日,当亚城虔诚的基督徒们排队上教堂顶膜礼拜万寿无疆的和永恒的老人家的时候, 亚城一小队“酒鬼子“在正午时分悄悄地从后门摸进了“老四川。“ 午时正,一声炮响,13条好汉举起了酒杯,庄严宣布,今儿个,一醉方休。谁喝醉了,谁买单。 当然,出席的也不全是“好汉,“ 还有二位女豪杰。 顶好超市的好汉“县委
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<P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">“<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>诗忙</SPAN>” <SPAN lang=ZH-CN>忙吟诗</SPAN><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">“<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>布诗</SPAN>” <SPAN lang=ZH-CN>诗非诗</SPAN><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>布衣</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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<P>谢黑衣大哥教晦</P> <P> </P> <P> </P> <P>敬上布衣</P>
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<P>“诗盲”吟盲诗,“妹子”颂紫(子)梅(妹)。</P> <P> </P> <P>诗盲</P>
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<P>看来这里“酒后诗言”的人不少。请继续。</P> <P> </P> <P>当年有个学习天津小荆庄 赛诗会 的活动,大家都在编顺口溜。</P> <P> </P> <P>-- 户人<BR></P>
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<P>古人对句作诗,讲究的就是个格式。这也是体现水平的一种办法。像你这般有酒有菜的,雅不雅单说,意境上已然输了,格式上还不抓把劲,还算对联吗?既然不算,那你费半天劲,干什么呢?要做就做最好的,要么就不写。大哥我评诗多年,遇到这样的难题,也不敢妄然应战。</P> <P>黑衣大哥</P>
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<P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>马大可骑人更便</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">一土日旺人言信</SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'"></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'"></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'"></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'"></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">布衣<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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<P>至<FONT color=#ff0000>红衣</FONT><FONT color=#000000 size=2>(删除不当署名)<BR></FONT><BR>您老是个高士, 谢谢您老的金言. 在下到此只图爽字逍遥, 有酒, 有菜, 有诗, 有画, 有奇女, 有义士, 有一六八, 等等 .... 不拘格式 琅琅上口 ... 若是临场考诗, 那当然是另当别论 .... 古为今用, 中为美用, 发洋光大.... 每天上班对著美文 下班对168逍遥一番, 其乐无穷 .... 在下也不是什么高手, 一个普通人而已. </P> <P> </P> <P>敬上</P>
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<P>妹:<BR>忘了给你评联。<BR>上联: “诗盲”赛诗忙<BR>下联: “玫瑰”比梅(玫)贵(瑰)<BR>首先,你忘了上联结尾仄,下联结尾平。你既想做机巧联(叠字、谐音),第1、4字就应相同,即同为“玫”,而非一“玫”一“梅”。<BR>细心一点,别太浮躁。<BR><BR>大哥</P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">先与游客</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">127</SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">朋友商量,您能否不用“大哥”署名?我因给妹妹(二妹子)写评语,一开始用大哥署名,以后就一直沿用下来了。在这篇文章的评语栏里我也已经发了数贴,也许您没有看见。您用“大哥”做您的笔名会引起混淆。给您带来不便,抱歉!</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">诗盲的这联不错:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">子女好大人可倚</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">鱼羊鲜千口甘甜</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">但仍非绝配,欠对仗(词性),只能作为趣联放宽联律。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">上下联意思完全不相关,称为无情对。经典一例有:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">三星白兰地</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">五月黄梅天</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">每一个字都极对仗,然而组词及全句则风马牛不相及。白兰地是酒名,酒仙们都熟悉。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">子女好大人可倚</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">鱼羊鲜四手去摆</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">此对句词性对得更好了,但意思有些牵强,另尾字成仄声了。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">布诗不是诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><BR></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; 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<P><FONT size=3><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p>我说布衣老弟,虽说你要仿《声律启蒙》中的“一东”部,也不能仿成这个样子啊!</o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P> <P><FONT size=3><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p>首先<FONT size=3><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p>韵脚乱了,人家有“风”“红”“弓”这些韵,你这篇去掉那些将将对上的词性,不客气地讲,这就是一片古文。</o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P> <P>退一步讲,古人有才,按韵脚而作,仓促之间想不出来是情有可原的。那怎么平仄也乱了呢?像你这样的高手,怎么能犯这么低级的错误呢?酒啊菜啊,切啊鲜啊,我就不一一说了。</P> <P>再次,就说你是古文,前言不搭后语,词句间跳跃性太大。如果要讲通,起码还要在每两句间加上一条注。</P> <P>以我来看,你这幅联,无韵无声无意,属于三光产品,打回重改,之后再拿来显摆!</P> <P> </P> <P>—— <FONT color=#000000 size=2>(删除不当署名)</FONT></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P>
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王先生改得不错.
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<P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; tab-stops: 8.1pt" class=MsoNormal><FONT size=3><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU">对画,酒对菜,白切对腌鲜。侠女对义士,书生对酒仙。醉吟酒, 樯上诗,凡尘对仙界。人间一六八,天上醉酒楼。两地艳锦碧连天,一园春色美利坚。<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; tab-stops: 8.1pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p><FONT size=3> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; tab-stops: 8.1pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p><FONT size=3> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; tab-stops: 8.1pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><FONT size=3>布衣填词<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P>把你们的好对拿出来让大家看看如何 ???</P> <P>-- 四奶</P> <P> </P>
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<P>"You all 诗盲" ! 敢这么叫板的也就‘二郎’啦!</P> <P>加油, 二郎!</P> <P> “二郎自大“嘛! 哈哈!</P> <P> </P> <P>---二妹子</P>
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一、二、三*……把你们的好对拿出来让大家看看如何?
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<P>You all 诗盲. I don't see good one yet</P> <P>-- 二郎</P>
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谢谢三哥,诗盲早有声律启蒙,但他没有读过。网上很多。三哥不妨将自己的绝对发上来让大家一开眼界。 这个地址有声律启蒙http://hi.baidu.com/qiuzhi930/blog/item/069cad6f7ace4cd281cb4a38.html
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发布于 2009-04-24 11:34
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<P>诗盲感兴趣,何不百度一下“对联”,还有“声律启蒙”和“笠翁对韵”,很有意思。</P> <P>-三哥</P>
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楼下这位才女/才子, 厉害。 让我们酗酒协会众人很荣幸。 谢谢 <br><br><br>亚城酗酒协会委员长 酒保<br>
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云对雨,雪对风,晚照对晴空。来鸿对去燕,宿鸟对鸣虫。三尺剑,六钧弓,岭北对江东。人间清暑殿,天上广寒宫。两岸晓烟杨柳绿,一园春雨杏花红。<BR>
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