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亚城酒仙协会第一次全城代表大会顺利举行
星期日,当亚城虔诚的基督徒们排队上教堂顶膜礼拜万寿无疆的和永恒的老人家的时候, 亚城一小队“酒鬼子“在正午时分悄悄地从后门摸进了“老四川。“ 午时正,一声炮响,13条好汉举起了酒杯,庄严宣布,今儿个,一醉方休。谁喝醉了,谁买单。 当然,出席的也不全是“好汉,“ 还有二位女豪杰。 顶好超市的好汉“县委
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<P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU">试著对一下</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">子女好大人可倚<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt">分米粉一人一天</SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Gothic'"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU">请</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">大哥和各位</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: PMingLiU">指</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">教</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 15pt; MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">-- <SPAN lang=ZH-CN>布衣</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal></o:p></SPAN></P>
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不好意思,补考没通过,奖也发过了,不过还想拿出吃饭的本事试试:<br><br><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">上联:</span> "<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">布诗</span>"<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">不是诗</span><br><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">下联: 食饭是凡事</span><br><br>还想了一对,也请大哥,二妹子和各位高人点评:<br><br>适之识知识<br>金歌(儿)唱劲歌<br>
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<FONT size=2><SPAN lang=EN><FONT size=2> <P>谢二妹子赠"衣" </P><FONT size=2> <P> </P></FONT><FONT size=2><FONT size=2> <P></FONT><FONT size=2><FONT color=#000000 size=2><STRONG>"布诗"不是诗</STRONG></FONT></FONT><FONT size=2><BR><FONT color=#000000><STRONG>"二妹"确为妹</STRONG></FONT></FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2> </P></FONT></FONT> <P>恭敬不如从命, 有趣 有趣 二妹竟成了"诗意" </P> <P>哈哈哈....</P> <P> </P> <P>谢谢户人为此衣绝配; 户人之学--"裁衣之学"博广精深.</P> <P> </P> <P>布衣在此拜谢大哥.</P> <P> </P> <P>再谢所有为此"衣"配对者</P> <P> </P> <P>布衣敬上</P></FONT> <P> </P> <P> </P></FONT></SPAN><FONT lang=ZH-CN face=SimSun size=2><FONT lang=ZH-CN face=SimSun size=2><SPAN lang=ZH></FONT></FONT></SPAN>
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<P>听大哥的,改选户人之作送给布衣!</P> <P><FONT color=#444444>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">布诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444"><FONT face="Times New Roman">"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">不是诗</SPAN></FONT><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444"><FONT face="Times New Roman"> "</FONT></SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">二妹</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444"><FONT face="Times New Roman">"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: 'MS Mincho'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'MS Mincho'">确</SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">为妹</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P>请笑纳!</P> <P> </P> <P>---二妹子</P>
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<P>妹,机巧联不一定都有理想对句,有时合了联律,却丢了意境、神韵。你这出句没准就是一绝对,不必太过强求。我还是喜欢户人之<“二妹”确为妹>。</P> <P>有一拆字联出句就很绝,恐怕至今尚无佳偶:<BR>子女好大人可倚</P> <P>大哥</P> <P> </P>
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<P><FONT size=2>户人兄弟过奖,在下不过一粗人也。您可能误会我是贵地某位联坛烧友,我还真读过其联作,确有特色,还真想有机会去看我妹时能与其当面切磋联艺。</FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2>“二而”音谐,就谐音而言更好些。</FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2></FONT> </P>
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<P>这里在开“赛联会”吗?</P> <P>俺看户人的</P> <P>"布诗"不是诗,<BR>“二妹"而为妹。</P> <P>对的好!俺改一个字:</P> <P>"布诗"不是诗,<BR>“二妹"尔为妹。</P> <P>(是和诗的谐音还是没对上)请大哥和“我哥”指教!</P> <P> </P> <P>---二妹子</P> <P> </P> <P> </P> <P> </P>
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<P><FONT size=4><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">上联:</SPAN> "<SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">布诗</SPAN>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">不是诗</SPAN><BR><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">下联: 二妹尔美妹</SPAN></FONT></P> <P><FONT size=4><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">叠字和谐音都好,遗憾的是“尔美”与“不是”欠对仗。<BR></P></SPAN></FONT>
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<P>大哥高人!(我也大概猜出您是谁了)</P> <P> </P> <P>我回“二妹子”联时的确是考虑了平仄对仗,相反、对立。但也为“布”、“不”谐音烦恼过。发完贴后想过用:</P> <P> </P> <P>"布诗"不是诗,<BR>"二妹"而为妹。</P> <P> </P> <P>请指教。</P> <P> </P> <P>-- 户人<BR></P>
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县委同志,带上相机哦!
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最后一个机会:<br>如果有朋友想来参加酒仙大会,赶紧到顶好超市找县委同志报名。 酒仙政治局将在近期决定看谁顺眼。 <br><br>下次聚会地点已经找好。 Emor大学边上的著名中国饭店筷子楼。 那里的老板说了,如果酒仙同志们不用筷子吃饭,他情愿请客!! 所以,我们政治局常委们一致决定: 下次聚会不许用筷子。自备五把叉子喝汤吃肉捞麻婆豆腐。谁敢用筷子,谁出钱。<br><br>嘿嘿。<br><br>中共亚城支部总书记 酒保 <br><br>特此公告<br>
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<font size="4">谢二妹子夸奖,更谢大哥点评,本人对的确实平仄不对:<br></font><p><font size="4"><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">上联:</span> "<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">布诗</span>"<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">不是诗</span><br><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">下联:</span> "<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">无情</span>"<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">却有情</span></font></p><p><font size="4"><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">既使二妹子发奖,也不好意思去领了。请大哥和二妹子高抬贵手,再给一次补考机会,成不?</span></font></p><p><font size="4"><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">上联:</span> "<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">布诗</span>"<span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">不是诗</span><br><span style="font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN">下联: 二妹尔美妹<br></span></font></p><br><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: 宋体;" lang="ZH-CN"></span>
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<P>酒会改对诗会了。</P> <P><IMG src="http://atlanta168.com/Api_Uppic/2009-04/124027410627489.bmp"><IMG src="http://atlanta168.com/Api_Uppic/2009-04/124027414426026.bmp"></P>
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COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>上联:</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><FONT face="Times New Roman"> "</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>布诗</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><FONT face="Times New Roman">"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>不是诗</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>下联:</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><FONT face="Times New Roman"> "</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>二妹</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><FONT face="Times New Roman">"</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; 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COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>但二妹子喜欢, 就它吧!</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>上联:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"> "<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>布诗</SPAN>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>不是诗</SPAN><BR><SPAN lang=ZH-CN>下联:</SPAN> "<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>无情</SPAN>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>却有情</SPAN><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; 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才看见二妹在这里征联。出句用了叠字、谐音,是很好的机巧联句。小时候学的那点东西还没忘,不错!既来了就帮你点评一下。<br /><br />最好的应是户人的这一句:<br /> "布诗"不是诗,<br /> "二妹"确为妹。<br />对仗、平仄俱佳。“布”“二”虽同为仄声,但一三五不论,可接受。“不”在“是”之前,念第二声,即平声,“确”为仄声,很配。<br />从词意上说,“不是”与“确为”相反、对立,很理想。<br />按联律,上联结尾应为仄,下联结尾应为平。如将此联上下句互换,前后承接不如现在理想,因是趣联,就宽容了吧。<br />如再苛求,则是谐音字未能对出。即,上联之“布”“不”和“是”“诗”分别互为谐音,下联之对应处若也能互为谐音,则十全十美。当然,趣联、机巧联要能对到十全十美是相当不易的。<br /><br />“布诗”不是诗<br />“玫瑰”不是花<br />“瑰”“花”不同字。“不是”与上联重了。<br /><br />上联: "布诗"不是诗<br />下联: "二妹"甘为妹<br />好。<br /><br />咚咚:<br />上联: "布诗"不是诗<br />下联: "沪人"曾负人<br />人人对了。诗人同平了。是负同仄了。<br /><br />2。“布诗”不是诗<br />“布施”却为施<br />“却为”好。上下联不可同字。<br /><br />3。“布诗”不是诗<br />“影星”影射星<br />该谐音处成同字了。<br /><br />4。“布诗”不是诗<br />“网管”网络管<br />如改成:<br />“布诗”不是诗,<br />“网管”枉冠管。<br />则叠字、谐音全对上了。<br /><br />6。“布诗”不是诗<br />“卞人”汴梁人<br /><br />“卞汴”谐音对了。<br /><br />上联: "布诗"不是诗<br />下联: "无情"却有情<br />意思承接好,叠字对了,但与诗同平了。<br /><br />上联: "布诗"不是诗<br />下联: "二妹"姐为妹<br /><br />姐字宜改。<br /><br />大哥
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<P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>二妹子</SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>如果你喜欢, 就它吧!</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN" lang=ZH-CN>上联:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"> "<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>布诗</SPAN>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>不是诗</SPAN><BR><SPAN lang=ZH-CN>下联:</SPAN> "<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>无情</SPAN>"<SPAN lang=ZH-CN>却有情</SPAN></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN></SPAN><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #444444; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">-- <SPAN lang=ZH-CN>布衣</SPAN></SPAN></P>
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