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见不少网友对对联有兴趣,特转些上联给大家玩玩。1,坐把春秋皆阅尽2,海峡两侧同山水3,竹苑凝霜箫曲冷4,雨问莲心千点事5,诗酒依然勘啸傲6,一屏锦绣织山色7,笔墨文章山水画8,举足何惧路途远9,竹影伏窗听梦语10,诗可醉人何必酒孺子牛
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>神童的这几联很好:<BR>[</FONT><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>坐把春秋皆阅尽</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>行将史记已玩通</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=2> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>雨问莲心千点事</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>云谈柳鬓万丝情</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=2> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>诗酒依然勘啸傲</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>干戈何以断愁肠</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=2> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>一屏锦绣织山色</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>半部论语理千秋</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=2> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>举足何惧路途远</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>垂首方知鹏程遥</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2></FONT></SPAN> </P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>竹影伏窗听梦语</FONT></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=2>松香入户伴贤音]<BR><BR>其他几联也都不错,尚需斟酌平仄。</FONT></SPAN></P></SPAN>
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<STRONG>[</STRONG><FONT size=2><STRONG>雨问莲心千点事<BR>雾拂雨荷几多愁]<BR><BR></STRONG>雨荷能否再斟酌?</FONT>
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<P><STRONG><FONT size=2>雨问莲心千点事<BR>雾拂雨荷几多愁</FONT></STRONG></P> <P>版主大人:感谢您提供的这个平台,让小女找到了新的乐趣(原来对联是如此的有趣),通过几天的尝试和您的点评以及各位联友的佳作欣赏,令我受益匪浅.最令我开心的是:当我把第一次的拙作战战惊惊的呈上之后,得到了您的嘉奖和鼓励,不仅满足了我小小的虚荣之心,更令我的信心大增.再次感谢您的鼓励和点评.这幅联中我将"莲心","雨荷"拟人物,不知这样是否可行?</P> <DIV id=yiv1080390796> <DIV>--- xiaonv</DIV></DIV>
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<P><STRONG>[</STRONG>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷<BR>荷庭散露琴声暖<STRONG>]</STRONG></P> <P>好!<BR>末尾字须上联为仄、下联为平。</P>
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<STRONG>[</STRONG>一屏锦绣织山色<BR>千帆璀灿映河光<STRONG>]<BR></STRONG><BR>很好的尝试!<BR>尚需改进。上下联对应字的平仄要相反,如难以全做到,至少第二、四、六、七字要做到(就七言联而言)。口诀为一三五不论,二四六分明。
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<FONT lang=ZH-CN face="MS Song"> <P>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷</P> <P>荷庭散露琴声暖</P></FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman"></FONT> <P align=left> </P> <P align=left>--<FONT lang=ZH-CN face="MS Song">莫愁</P></FONT>
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<FONT lang=ZH-CN face="MS Song"> <P align=left> 一屏锦绣织山色</P> <P align=left> 千帆璀灿映河光</P></FONT> <P align=left></P> <P>--<FONT lang=ZH-CN face="MS Song">莫愁</P></FONT>
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<P><FONT size=2>"诗可醉人何必酒<BR>情能会意勿需言"</FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2></FONT> </P> <P><FONT size=2>好联!</FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2></FONT> </P> <P><FONT size=2>一俗人</FONT></P> <P><BR></P>
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<FONT size=2>诗可醉人何必酒<BR>情能会意勿需言<BR><BR>诗可醉人何必酒<BR>墨堪香我勿须花<BR><BR>游子<BR></FONT>
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<P><FONT size=2>【改联:<BR></FONT><FONT size=2><STRONG>竹影伏窗听梦语 <BR></STRONG></FONT><FONT size=2><STRONG>月光爬岸窥私情】<BR><BR></STRONG>似乎情私更对仗些。私情,私为形容词,而情私之私为名词。<BR>下联结尾三连平了,可将窥改为同义仄声字。</FONT></P>
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<P>[举足何惧路途远<BR>回眸犹喜天地宽]<BR><BR>好!<BR>上联循今音,“足”为平声(古音为仄),因此改眸为首吧,喜惧同仄,改为欣,另,改犹为尤:<BR>举足何惧路途远<BR>回首尤欣天地宽</P>
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<P><STRONG><FONT size=2>[再改:</FONT></STRONG></P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷 <BR>梅林傲雪笛声长</FONT></STRONG></P> <P>看来用"扬"也有问题,词性不对了,还是改用"长"好了.]<BR><BR>其实我也更喜欢扬。“扬”一般做动词,但也可作形容词,如悠扬。</P>
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<P>改联:</P> <P> <STRONG><FONT size=1>竹影伏窗听梦语 </FONT></STRONG></P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=1> 月光爬岸窥私情</FONT></STRONG></P> <P><FONT size=1><STRONG>---</STRONG>xiaonv</FONT></P>
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<P>举足何惧路途远</P> <P>回眸犹喜天地宽</P> <P> </P> <P>大巴扎</P>
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<P><STRONG><FONT size=2></FONT></STRONG> </P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>再改:</FONT></STRONG></P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷 <BR>梅林傲雪笛声长</FONT></STRONG></P> <P>看来用"扬"也有问题,词性不对了,还是改用"长"好了.</P>
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<P>改过:</P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷 <BR>梅林傲雪笛声扬</FONT></STRONG></P> <P>--xiaonv</P>
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<P><STRONG><FONT size=2>诗可醉人何必酒 <BR></FONT></STRONG><STRONG><FONT size=1><FONT size=2>心能解语怎需言<BR><BR>好!<BR></FONT></FONT></STRONG></P>
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<P><FONT size=2><STRONG>竹苑凝霜箫曲冷 <BR></STRONG></FONT><FONT size=2><STRONG>梅林傲雪笛声寒<BR><BR></STRONG>好!上联写意清凉(或消极),下联对立(积极)会更佳。傲雪已然积极,改后半句比如:<BR>梅林傲雪笛声长。</FONT></P>
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<P>忘记署名,游53和51同属一人</P>
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