<P>一屏锦绣织山色</P> <P>满目青松映湖光</P>

感谢您的鼓励!我会努力!!!

你此联已经完美，无可挑剔。希望继续尝试，我会与你共同切磋。

大人过奖了,小女受之有愧!如果是版主的话,还请大人赐教.

<P>首次尝试便一步到位，才气了得！小才女起个笔名啊。</P>

<P><STRONG><FONT size=2>感谢鼓励!这是小女第一次对联,还请板主大人多多指教!</FONT></STRONG></P>

<P><STRONG><FONT size=2>雨问莲心千点事<BR></FONT></STRONG><STRONG><FONT size=2>风摇柳影万般情</FONT></STRONG><BR><BR><BR>太好了！Perfect!</P>

<P><STRONG><EM><FONT face=宋体></FONT></EM></STRONG>&nbsp;</P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>雨问莲心千点事</FONT></STRONG></P> <P><STRONG><FONT size=2>风摇柳影万般情</FONT></STRONG><BR><BR></P><EM><FONT face=宋体></FONT></EM>

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><FONT size=2><FONT color=#000000><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">坐把春秋皆阅尽</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><FONT size=2><FONT color=#000000><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">行将史记已玩通</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#000000 size=2>&nbsp;</FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><FONT size=2><FONT color=#000000><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">海峡两侧同山水</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=#000000 size=2>朝岚一面共风月<BR><BR>小鹤好联！<BR>月水同仄了。</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P>雨问莲心千点事<BR>风伴柳絮一生情<BR>好对！<BR>仅有一点小瑕疵，伴与问同仄了，如将伴改成同义平声字就更好了。</P>

<P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><FONT size=3><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">顶：</SPAN></FONT></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><FONT size=3><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">坐把春秋皆阅尽</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><FONT size=3><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">行将史记已玩通</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT size=3 face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</FONT></o:p></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><FONT size=3><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">海峡两侧同山水</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=3>朝岚一面共风月</FONT></SPAN></P> <P style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt" class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #444444; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT size=3>孤鹤</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P><FONT size=2>风伴柳絮一生情<BR>柳絮这个对得好！</FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2>另外在这里谢谢楼下两位欣赏，“雨问莲心千点事”倒让我想起一个以前填的</FONT> <TABLE class=table-bg cellSpacing=5 cellPadding=0 width="100%" border=0> <TBODY> <TR> <TD><FONT size=2>【巫山一段云】 荷语</FONT></TD></TR> <TR id=p20543 style="DISPLAY: block" name="p20543"> <TD vAlign=top> <TABLE cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0 width="100%" border=0> <TBODY> <TR> <TD class=post-body> <P><FONT size=2>清露湿凉亭 <BR><!---->哀筝诉苦情<BR><!---->半池翠绿碧罗裙 　　　　　<BR><!---->未语泪先盈 <BR><!----><BR><!---->浅醉依花憩 <BR><!---->扶风弄娉婷 <BR><!---->娇羞不胜夜风袭 <BR><!---->向月借怜惜<BR><!----></FONT></P> <P><FONT size=2>--荷碧</FONT></P></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></P>

雨问莲心千点事<BR>风伴柳絮一生情<BR><BR>柳絮<BR><BR>

回荷碧：<BR>雨问莲心千点事<BR>风扶柳腰一般愁<BR>好！建议改腰为叶。对仗、平仄都不错。

<P>"雨问莲心千点事<BR>风扶柳腰一般愁"</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P><FONT color=#ff0000 size=5>好！<FONT color=#000000 size=2>管它什么平仄，格律，好听就行。<FONT color=#ff0000 size=5>顶！</FONT></FONT></FONT></P> <P><FONT color=#ff0000 size=5></FONT>&nbsp;</P> <P><FONT color=#000000 size=2>一俗人</FONT></P>

<P>雨问莲心千点事<BR>风扶柳腰一般愁</P> <P>图好玩，没有平仄，没有格律，乱对的~~</P> <P>-荷碧</P>